Friday, November 13, 2015

11.3 Outlining My Public Argument.

P3 Outline


  1. Is your voice being heard? 
    1. State of Hawaii enabling the TMT construction site 
    2. Native Hawaiians against TMT construction site 
    3. I am introducing with Thinking about your situation because I am moving an audience to take action. 
  2. Was the State of Hawaii listening to the community when enabling the TMT construction site? 
    1. Department of Land and Natural Resources 
      1. Building Permits issued to build TMT 
      2. Emergency rule prohibits camping gear and access to mountain from 10 PM 4 to AM on 8 mile road to Mauna Kea construction site 
    2. Police Department 
      1. 4 major protest events on Mauna Kea 
        1. 31 arrests made 
      2. Protest events on Maui 
        1. arrests made 
    3. Criminal Justice System 
      1. Supreme Court 
        1. Arguments against desecration of most significant cultural sites in Hawaii 
        2. Justices question issued permits during oral arguments 
  3. What actions has the community taken against TMT construction site? 
    1. Actions taken against selection of Mauna Kea as TMT construction site 
      1. Protesters block singular road to construction to prevent desecration of sacred land 
      2. Protesters would like to educate scientist at International Astronomical Union Conference about why the natives are against the site that has been chosen. 
      3. Protesters have spread to the Daniel K. Inouye Solar Telescope construction site on Maui. 
    2. Oral Arguments to Supreme Court of Hawaii 
  4. What can we do to to be heard? 
    1. Continue supporting the efforts of community leaders 
    2. Write letters and sign petitions to the governor 
    3. I am concluding with Call to Action because I will explain to the audience how to take action.

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